Dear Bill my owner,
It's me your dog Truffles.
I am leaving and I think this is a perfect time while you're on vacation.
Before I left i was just wondering why you even got me!
In case you forgot I need to be fed and walked. You barely feed me and I haven't been walked for almost two weeks and I'm starting to smell gross too!
I also get really bored. There's nothing to do. Maybe I would have made some friends but they all make fun of me. But who can blame them I'm a rotting, shaggy dog who looks like he's from the open streets! Maybe I wouldn't be as bored If I had dog toys but you barely leave the house!
Bill you're all ways drunk and lazy, you're very very grumpy, you have a lumpy belly and I've got to say you're never gonna meet a lady!
While you left for vacation I decided to leave the dumpster called your house.
I have found a caring owner. It's great! I get fed and walked and I don't smell bad anymore. I even made some friends.
Well Bill I hope you have a good rest of your life.
Sincerely, Truffles.
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u spelled always wrong =P
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ReplyDeleteSaman,
A good effort here on your first entry. Be sure to watch your verb tense (sometimes you use present tense and other times you use past tense-ask me if you're not sure how to do this). Also, be careful with sequencing. You jump around a lot. Have a CENTRAL point and then stick to it with good, solid supporting information.